Byōki no zenchō no ko, Jutsu

[Byoki]

Ninjutsu

Chakurasenshingu gijutsu
Chakra sensing technique
class-supplementary

A skill used by sensor type shinobi to detect someone's chakra. Using this technique, sensors can tell when enemies are approaching, and can easily track down targets. The range of this technique varies between sensors.

Kanchi Denden
Sensing Transmission
Class-supplementary

By making physical contact with another individual, the user is able to transmit what they are currently sensing directly into the other person's mind.

Shintenshin no Jutsu
Mind Body Switch Technique
C-rank Jutsu

The Mind Body Switch Technique is the signature ability of the Yamanaka clan. Originally, this ninjutsu was suited for intelligence-gathering missions rather than battle. With it, a ninja sends his mind into a target's body supplanting the target's mind with their own. The user transfers their consciousness to the target, giving them complete control of the body for a short period of time. While in control of the body, the user is able to communicate with the target. As the user propels all of their mental energy, the shooting range and number of hits are considerably limited. It is also possible for the user to switch bodies with the target. This has great strategic value when used on a team-mate as neither body is left incapacitated and they may also make use of the user's abilities as well as their own while doing this. To remain inconspicuous when spying, the user can perform this technique on an animal, such as a hawk, which they can use to do aerial reconnaissance.
Normally, their original body is left defenceless while this technique is active, leaving it susceptible to attack until they return. The mind transfer moves in a straight direction and takes some time to return to the user's body if it misses. Because of these reasons, it should only be used on immobilised targets. Similarly, if the opponent's will is strong enough, they can force the user from their body, as Sakura Haruno did to Ino Yamanaka during the Chūnin Exams. Lastly, should any physical injury befall the victim's body while the mind-link is active, it would cause the user's body to also receive those same injuries. This can be rectified if user cancels the technique before the victim's body receives the damage.

Taijutsu

Hagane no odori
the steel dances
C-class

Having spent much time learning the way of the sword Byōki no zenchō no ko is able to draw his blade and in the same motion make an attack as quick as lighting.

Burēdo no shōheki
Barrier of the blade
C-class

Having been taught that taking a life was the one of the worst crimes against life Byōki no zenchō no ko learned to form defensive techniques. To aid him in defending himself while never having to risk taking another life he practiced lighting quick movements and parries to be able to block shuriken and kunai.

Nashi ejji ha
Blade with no edge
C-class

Continuing with his defensive training Byōki no zenchō no ko learned to deliver strikes with his sword with the back of the blade and the blunt sides to allow his attacks to protect him from harm while only bruising or maiming an enemy rather then taking their life. Allowing him to strike and deliver temporary paralysis or unconsciousness to enemy's but never to kill.

[Professor Badass!!]

As I said, I would recommend using the template, or looking to other people examples on how the jutsu process should go.

From what I am looking at, none of these (save for the sensory) are actual techniques. Also I don't see myself being convinced of any legitimate way to 'mind read'. At least not in the midst of combat, as reading thoughts or memories seems to be reserved to in a specific set conditions, where the target is acceptable to probing.

[Byoki]

ya i understand the sensory abilities would only be useful in non combat situations.It would only be able to recognize threat or danger while in combat like a persons eyes would do. I was mostly trying to find a way for him to be "blind" and still have a way to not be totally impaired by his lack of vision in combat. Everything else is just for role play sake and i would plan for him to actually learn jutsu and techniques as he starts to remember or is taught.
Especially because i am so new to the naruto universe i thought it would be acceptable to role play a character that knows just about as much as i do, which is very little other then i skimmed over on the naruto wiki.
Thanks again for your help, if its at all a problem i have no problem with just role playing a character with no jutsu right off the bat and the limited taijutsu he has learned. Either way i was just wanting to role play so anything i can do to expedite that process i will totally do, i am not trying to make any sort of "broken" or "overpowered" character i just wanted to role play and this being my first concept it seemed like really fun concept to role play.

konahav2.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=origchar&action=display&thread=6106 <-- for reference to my character history

[Professor Badass!!]

I understand where you're coming from and you're free to RP as you'd like. But here's where the disconnect is.

This is an example of a jutsu:

Doton: Doryū Heki [Earth Release: Earth Style Wall]
A defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large mud wall to help defend against incoming attack.

There's the name of the technique and what it does.

Aside from the sensory jutsu you linked from Wikipedia, everything else in your profile isn't a jutsu at all. Just descriptions of your character that don't really warrant having a separate technique. This is really for registering skills or abilities so significant that they need to be approved by the staff as they change the "powers" of your character.

The two things you have there don't really fit that criteria, so you're good to go.

[Byoki]

Oh i see what your saying, thank you that was actually really helpful.

I have been doing some research since your last post and with your response i think i know what i need to do, thanks again!

i just modified my first post here and i hope its up to expectations!!

[Professor Badass!!]

Your character is a genin, which translates to “Low Ninja”. I would look to the earlier chapters of the Manga to see that Genin, save for the “super power cases” like Naruto and Sasuke, don't employ such elaborate jutsu like the ones you're applying for. This is because they rarely have the level of chakra control required for such techniques. If you want them, you'll need to prove that your character's aptitude is high enough. This is often through training, in character accomplishments, and so forth. That or you could attempt to graduate to a chuunin or higher, when the appropriate exams come up.

Chakra sensing technique-Approved, because you're a Yamanaka, but just so you're aware, the range on this is fairly limited. Even Ino who was able to sense chakra during the Chunin exams, was not able to do so at any large distance.

Mind Body Transmission Technique-Denied. This jutsu is beyond what a genin could perform normally. And it requires equipment to help project those thoughts across long distances.

Shinranshin no Jutsu-Denied, again it's B-rank, and the character has not demonstrated being able to utilize jutsu of that caliber just yet.

Shinranshin Shokkuueibu no Jutsu-Same as above. But more so, the Yamanaka techniques are not related to Doujutsu, so the area of effect is not 'everyone within his gaze”. Thus far, they've demonstrated to require specific targets.

Everything else not mentioned is approved.

Edit-Here's something that's bothering me after looking more into his profile. The character was a genin and by some reason, left his village. So how would he have the knowledge and mentorship of the advanced Yamanaka techniques away from the clan itself?

[Byoki]

Thanks for the approvals on the jutsu, i have also added some possible responses to the questions previously stated in hopes to find common ground. But if my answers are not adequate i still thank you for the time you spent helping me to understand jutsu and the process by which to get them approved on this site. As well as a big thanks for letting me step forward at this point with an understanding of my characters current capabilities.

He was about to become a chunin when his accident happened, would that mean that his clan would not be willing to teach him the jutsu of his age?

I was mostly just trying to choose jutsu that fit the concept, though he had never actually become a chunin i assumed maybe his accident had allowed him to unlock teachings taught to him in riddled lessons from his yamanaka elders.

I would also be willing to say he had been a chunin for some time before his accident if it would make more sense for the level of teachings i had foreseen him knowing and learning?

also to answer the questions of the holes in his back story, i had written it that way on purpose to allow the admins or whoever writes the story arcs and stuff to have the freedom to decide what had happened and fill in the blanks. I thought it would be more fun that way, a collaborative story is how i usually like to write and develop my RP characters. I hope that makes sense and i hoped i was able to answer the previous questions to your satisfaction.

Just a note if i need to rewrite the character to facilitate the needs of rules and such i have no problem doing that, I am still very new to the naruto universe and this site so i just wanna make sure that everyone is happy and that i can enjoy my time role playing here. Thanks again!

[Professor Badass!!]

It would make a lot more sense that he was a Chuunin for awhile-closer to Tokujounin or Jounin, if those are the techniques you'd want. What you're applying for are much more elaborate clan secret techniques, which I cannot see being taught or instructed without dedicated mentor ship of other clan members given the suggested complexity. They're not really something that can be just pieced together in riddles because he's literally projecting his spirit/will out into others and forcing a dominance against someone else. That isn't something that is left to improvisation and I would imagine, at least on the fact that Ino risked damage when projecting herself-that they could be life threatening if not done correctly.

As far as your back history. The staff isn't going to fill the blanks in your character's history for you. Mainly because there are way too many characters to take that type of intimate approach. Any details or blanks is left to the responsibility of the person creating the character.

That said, yes, your history leaves a lot of blanks in the terms of trying to justify the jutsu you're applying for. There's a lot of “detail” yes, but that detail doesn't play a part in the jutsu you wish to have. I have no idea how long he's been with his clan members, the time when he left, the skill sets he was leaning towards, why he's been a genin for so long-even if name only-and so forth.

And on a non related note. Please resize your avatar. As in physically crop a new image to the site's dimensions. The resize code only applies to certain skins, and what you have is stretching the page.

[Byoki]

Definitely makes sense, ill keep him as he was when you approved him and if your comfortable with it i can work towards those jutsu in the future at some point. Thanks again

[Noz]

Was this settled?

[Byoki]

Yes i believe so

[Byoki]

Niban Ome [Second Sight] C-Ranked
After spending the last several years using his chakra sensing ability as his main form of sight, byoki has adapted to his current situation through the use of his other senses and seeing the ebb and flow of chakra around him. With this technique byoki can without the need of his eyes and using a slow radiation of his own chakra he can scan his surroundings. Yet because this ability is not based upon the limits of his eye's this technique can be used to scan an area further then the human eye could. While performing minor tasks such as walking or talking byoki is capable of scanning a one kilometer (0.6 mile) area from himself, with him at the center. While performing no other tasks byoki is capable of scanning a much larger area closer to six kilometers (3.7 miles).

[Masahige]

Denied. This is beyond the ability of a Chūnin. Lower the range significantly.

[Byoki]

modified.
changed the range to 1 kilometer (0.6 mile), and max range with complete concentration to 6 kilometer (3.7 mile).

[Masahige]

Alright. Second Sight is approved.

[Byoki]


[b]Niban Ome[/b] [[i]Second Sight[/i]] C-Ranked
After spending the last several years using his chakra sensing ability as his main form of sight, byoki has adapted to his current situation through the use of his other senses and seeing the ebb and flow of chakra around him. With this technique byoki can without the need of his eyes and using a slow radiation of his own chakra he can scan his surroundings. Yet because this ability is not based upon the limits of his eye's this technique can be used to scan an area further then the human eye could. While performing minor tasks such as walking or talking byoki is capable of scanning a one kilometer (0.6 mile) area from himself, with him at the center. While performing no other tasks byoki is capable of scanning a much larger area closer to six kilometers (3.7 miles).