Aburame Shinwa | Jutsu

[Aburame Shinwa]

Aburame Shinwa | Jônin | Konohagakure no Sato

Jutsu

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Kikaichû no Jutsu | Parasitic Destruction Insect Technique
The secret technique of the Aburame clan. The Aburame host thousands of insects within their bodies who feed off their chakra in return for assisting them in battle, granting Aburame the ability to perform ninjutsu-like techniques using the insects without performing hand seals or molding chakra.

Shinwa hosts a rare form of insect called nano-sized, venomous insects. These bugs destroy their enemies' cells, causing excruciating pain in the process. Unlike standard kikaichû, which are able to act independently of the user, the nano-sized insects can only be transferred onto a victim’s body by direct physical contact; though only a touch from the user’s skin is required as the bugs can circumvent most forms of clothing.

Aburame Bushido | Aburame Way of the Warrior
Shinwa’s fighting style which incorporates the use of his poisonous insects and sword. He uses powerful single-handed strikes with his sword capable of knocking back enemies and breaking through their guard, following up with unarmed strikes using his free hand to transfer his insects. The power of his sword strikes increase dramatically when he uses both hands, but doing so makes it harder to infect his enemies.

Ekibyô | Infectious Disease
A technique utilizing Shinwa's insects. Using his free hand, Shinwa uses a palm strike to infect a target. Once infected, he turns the palm strike into a grab and throws the target towards a secondary target, infecting the second target as well should the two collide.

Desenbyô | Contagious Disease
A technique utilizing Shinwa's insects. He coats his entire body from head to toe in the insects, causing his flesh to turn a purplish color. This technique causes anybody he touches or who touches him to become infected, making defending against his unarmed strikes more difficult.

Yozen | Lingering Life
A technique utilizing Shinwa's insects. Shinwa can use his chakra to force a small group of his insects to lie dormant for a time, allowing him to place them on a target without the insects immediately attacking. This dormant state doesn't last long, after which the target will feel the effects of the nano-sized insects as normal.

Ryûkiba | Dragon Fang
A single-handed sword strike, this technique uses earth chakra flow to enhance the weight of the blow just before impact, causing the strike to hit with enough force to break through most guards, or to knock most opponents off balance in order to allow a follow up attack.

Kabutogiri | Helm Cleaver
A powerful two-handed sword strike, this technique uses earth chakra flow to enhance the weight of the strike to give it enough power to shatter the ground underneath the target upon impact, even if it doesn’t cut through the target.

Gyôseiraishû | Morning Star Raid
A two-handed sword kata, this technique uses wind chakra flow to enhance the range of the slash. The kata consists of a rising slash which is followed by a horizontal slash and finishes off with a straight thrust. It is possible to alter the attack range of the weapon by adjusting the amount of chakra put into the blade.

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Hijutsu: Kagemushi Bakudan | Secret Art: Shadow Insect Bomb
A technique using Shinwa's insects and a Kage Bunshin. After creating the Kage Bunshin, Shinwa transfers a large amount of real insects to it which begin to rapidly drain the chakra from the clone. The clone will then rush headlong into a target or group of targets, aiming to deposit the insects as quickly as possible before dispersing.

Kage Bunshin no Jutsu | Shadow Clone Technique
A technique that generates a perfect clone of the user, Kage Bunshin are more solid than a normal clone and can take more damage before dispelling. They can also use any technique their owner can. The creation of Kage Bunshin requires splitting your chakra evenly between yourself and the clone, and as such creating too many can be dangerous.

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[b]Kikaichû no Jutsu[/b] | [i]Parasitic Destruction Insect Technique[/i]
The secret technique of the Aburame clan.  The Aburame host thousands of insects within their bodies who feed off their chakra in return for assisting them in battle, granting Aburame the ability to perform ninjutsu-like techniques using the insects without performing hand seals or molding chakra.

Shinwa hosts a rare form of insect called nano-sized, venomous insects. These bugs destroy their enemies' cells, causing excruciating pain in the process. Unlike standard kikaichû, which are able to act independently of the user, the nano-sized insects can only be transferred onto a victim’s body by direct physical contact; though only a touch from the user’s skin is required as the bugs can circumvent most forms of clothing.

[b]Aburame Bushido[/b] | [i]Aburame Way of the Warrior[/i]
Shinwa’s fighting style which incorporates the use of his poisonous insects and sword. He uses powerful single-handed strikes with his sword capable of knocking back enemies and breaking through their guard, following up with unarmed strikes using his free hand to transfer his insects. The power of his sword strikes increase dramatically when he uses both hands, but doing so makes it harder to infect his enemies.

[b]Ekibyô[/b] | [i]Infectious Disease[/i]
A technique utilizing Shinwa's insects. Using his free hand, Shinwa uses a palm strike to infect a target. Once infected, he turns the palm strike into a grab and throws the target towards a secondary target, infecting the second target as well should the two collide.

[b]Desenbyô[/b] | [i]Contagious Disease[/i]
A technique utilizing Shinwa's insects. He coats his entire body from head to toe in the insects, causing his flesh to turn a purplish color. This technique causes anybody he touches or who touches him to become infected, making defending against his unarmed strikes more difficult.

[b]Yozen[/b] | [i]Lingering Life[/i]
A technique utilizing Shinwa's insects. Shinwa can use his chakra to force a small group of his insects to lie dormant for a time, allowing him to place them on a target without the insects immediately attacking. This dormant state doesn't last long, after which the target will feel the effects of the nano-sized insects as normal.

[b]Ryûkiba[/b] | [i]Dragon Fang[/i]
A single-handed sword strike, this technique uses earth chakra flow to enhance the weight of the blow just before impact, causing the strike to hit with enough force to break through most guards, or to knock most opponents off balance in order to allow a follow up attack.

[b]Kabutogiri[/b] | [i]Helm Cleaver[/i]
A powerful two-handed sword strike, this technique uses earth chakra flow to enhance the weight of the strike to give it enough power to shatter the ground underneath the target upon impact, even if it doesn’t cut through the target.

[b]Gyôseiraishû[/b] | [i]Morning Star Raid[/i]
A two-handed sword kata, this technique uses wind chakra flow to enhance the range of the slash. The kata consists of a rising slash which is followed by a horizontal slash and finishes off with a straight thrust. It is possible to alter the attack range of the weapon by adjusting the amount of chakra put into the blade.

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[b]Hijutsu: Kagemushi Bakudan[/b] | [i]Secret Art: Shadow Insect Bomb[/i]
A technique using Shinwa's insects and a [i]Kage Bunshin[/i]. After creating the [i]Kage Bunshin[/i], Shinwa transfers a large amount of real insects to it which begin to rapidly drain the chakra from the clone. The clone will then rush headlong into a target or group of targets, aiming to deposit the insects as quickly as possible before dispersing.

[b]Kage Bunshin no Jutsu[/b] | [i]Shadow Clone Technique[/i]
A technique that generates a perfect clone of the user, Kage Bunshin are more solid than a normal clone and can take more damage before dispelling. They can also use any technique their owner can. The creation of Kage Bunshin requires splitting your chakra evenly between yourself and the clone, and as such creating too many can be dangerous.

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[Masahige]

After discussing it with another staff member, we've decided that due to the nature of the Aburame, you cannot have such an extensive list of elemental ninjutsu. Narrow the elemental techniques down to one or two D or C ranked techniques.

Morning Star Raid is denied. Producing blades of wind is the sort of elemental re-composition that requires hand seals. It's a ninjutsu type of ability, not a kenjutsu. Not unless you have an approved weapon that can do the elemental re-composition for you.

Meteor Blade is denied. In what way is this enhancing of the previous technique so drastic that the collateral damage escalated so much? If it's getting even heavier, what justified that your character is even strong enough to wield a blade so heavy that striking a wall topples it over>

[Aburame Shinwa]

Elemental ninjutsu apparently can't be less than C ranked, and why would they be unable to mold elemental jutsu more complex than C rank?

Morning Star Raid - 'generate a wave of cutting wind behind the blade' - I.E. the wind caused by the sword swing (That is, the disturbance in the air caused by an edge cutting through it) becomes enhanced with chakra. I'm not making dozens of wind blades, I'm just causing the wake of the sword strike to be capable of cutting things.

Meteor Blade - 'this strike is a leaping two-handed slash enhanced with earth chakra flow.' Emphasis on the word 'leaping' - The sword's weight is increased while in the air, which makes it land with greater impact. He's not enhancing the sword and then swinging, he's jumping and then enhancing the sword while swinging.

[Masahige]

It's because your character is supposed to be geared for close combat, from all that I can gather, and that these jutsu have absolutely nothing to do with a more taijutsu and kenjutsu oriented character. Not only that, we have never seen anybody from a clan with distinct Hijutsu use anything other than Hijutsu, save for filler Anime episodes. Let alone the fact that your character is an Aburame, who are constantly having their chakra being fed off of by the bugs living inside of them. Combined with the fact that Aburame Hijutsu either don't cost chakra, or cost very little chakra, then we can easily go by the assumption that they don't have the reserves to promote focusing on a 'traditional' Ninjutsu experience.

So I'm not approving an excess amount of ninjutsu for your character, who's focus is plain as day meant not to be ninjutsu, and I'm not going to approve complex ninjutsu above the rank of C for him.

Before I hear about it, I did look at your profile and I've seen what you've listed him as proficient in. But I don't care. Going over your jutsu, combined with my reasoning about clans with Hiden and the Aburame, and the fact that I'm not the only one who feels this way about this character, that's why I'm telling you to narrow down the list.

Morning Star Raid is still denied. That is not an ability you can perform without hand seals, unless the blade is meant to elementally recompose chakra for the user.

Meteor Blade is still denied. If it is exactly the same thing as it's previous incarnation, except for leaping, then why is it doing notably more damage than the other one? Yes, it may do more damage, but it won't be toppling small buildings or walls. Break through, yes. Topple, no.

[Aburame Shinwa]

Modifed. Removed most of my elemental jutsu and added more Insect-based techniques and Taijutsu. Also changed Morning Star Raid.

[Masahige]

Bad Breath and Exile Blade are denied on the basis that they defy the fact that Nano-Sized, Venomous Insects specifically require physical contact from the user to be transmitted. I'm not comfortable approving alternate or extended forms of transmission for something that is already an extremely deadly ability.

Hidden Danger and God of Pestilence are denied as Hijutsu, because they are not Hijutsu. These two techniques really have anything to do with the insects themselves, because giving them Doton nature chakra isn't going to affect your hand going through the wall, or you going into the ground. All these techniques are doing is affecting your character, and not really his insects. This doesn't fall in line with Aburame Hijutsu.

I'm tentative on Shadow Insect Bomb and Kage Bunshin until I can get in touch with Shimada.

What's the extended length for Morning Star Raid?

[Aburame Shinwa]

Modified.

I've removed all of the elemental jutsu in the list.

Bad Breath and Exile Blade - My defense of these techniques are as follows: The insects are being transferred through physical contact. I am putting my bare hand onto the sword for Exile Blade, that's how they're getting out of my body, which fits with the description of the insects. I'm not making them fly out under their own power, I am physically putting them onto the sword and they don't last long on the sword either, only the duration of a single sword swing.

As to Bad Breath - I am literally spitting the insects out. I've gathered them into my mouth, which is a place that they can go, and am spitting them out like you would spit saliva. They're not leaving my body under their own power, I am physically ejecting them. Not a whole lot, and you'd have to be literally in front of my face for it to work as it says in the technique.

Morning Star Raid - The extended range is variable, just like other wind-based chakra flow techniques such as the Hien whose description states "It is also possible to alter the attack range of the weapon by adjusting the amount of chakra put into the blade."

[Masahige]

These bugs need to be transferred through direct physical contact from the host himself, not in a spray in the air or on a sword. Both of them are still denied.

Morning Star Raid- Add that description to the attack and it'll be approved.

Still waiting on Shimada for the the Shadow Insect Bomb and Kage Bunshin. If I don't hear from him by tomorrow, I'll go ahead and make my final ruling on thm.

[Aburame Shinwa]

Modified. Removed bad breath and exile blade, modified morning star raid.

Also, I now have a holding for Shinwa.

konahav2.proboards.com/thread/6695/aburame-shinwa?page=1&scrollTo=22015

[Professor Badass!!]

Hijutsu: Kagemushi Bakudan | Secret Art: Shadow Insect Bomb

Isn't this just the same as the insect clone technique?

naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Insect_Clone_Technique

[Aburame Shinwa]

No, the Insect Clone uses kikaichu to make a clone.

What I'm doing with Kagemushi Bakudan is creating a Kage Bunshin, and then covering him with real insects, and then suiciding him into the enemy.

[Professor Badass!!]

Why?

You're dividing half of your chakra, then whatever minimal amount of chakra needed to keep the bugs subdued/under your control, to feed over to a clone to self destruct.

Or you can skip the whole part of dividing your chakra and using a mass of insects, which is proven to have enough integrity to partner for melee attacks and use skills of their own. See: Tetsuzankō Iron Mountain Leaning.

And likely still keep your bugs.

I don't think any of us is going to vouch that the Aburame have a huge chakra store, but regardless, mechanically this technique seems to gimp more than provide any tactical advantage when the much more efficient skill is already canon.

[Aburame Shinwa]

Because the poisonous insects I have can't be controlled independently in order to form the insect clone, and I've been told that I can't have more than one type of insect. What would you suggest other than using kage bunshin as an efficient means to do the same effect?