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Post by Uchiha Shinji on Dec 30, 2010 20:56:56 GMT -5
DAMN ISU! ... Sorry Neji... I didn't read any of the profiles or swords in this thread so I didn't know... But I changed it. =]
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The Mad Hatter
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Post by The Mad Hatter on Dec 31, 2010 0:29:15 GMT -5
AAAANNNNDDDD no sword can have the power to change the weather or cause natural disasters. That's OP.
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Post by Uchiha Shinji on Dec 31, 2010 4:21:04 GMT -5
Ugh.. really? lol Okay... I changed it.
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Post by Jace on Dec 31, 2010 8:51:14 GMT -5
Name: Taiyou Satsu
Rank: Jonin
Brief History: An Orphan still a baby whose parents were both killed in the First Shinobi War; Satsu was taken into the family of a Kenjutsu Master. Growing up Satsu learned a unique, athletic style of Kenjutsu taught to him by his adoptive Father. As he learned and progressed his skills were akcnowldged throughout the village as a extremely gifted swordsman if not a genius of the blade.
In the Second Shinobi War Satsu shredded the opposing countries with his Kenjutsu techniques. His reputation grew among some of the enemy shinobi. Satsu would destroy whole squads of enemy ninja and upon his return to Kirigakure he was acknowledged for his efforts.
Sword Name and Abilities: Ichiro and Sori [Staight and Curve] Ichiro and Sori are a pair of twin swords which Satsu created himself. Ichiro has a rectangular blade while Sori is clasically styled. They are weighted perfectly for Satsu. Both of the swords blades are 1m in length. The main ability of the blades is that they are able to convert Satsu's chakra and release it as shock waves. These shock waves can be released in any way be it a jab or a slash. The power of these shock waves is controlled by how much chakra Satsu channels into the blade. The power can be as weak as knocking someone over or as strong as destroying structures. Satsu's most common death stroke is used with this ability. Once he pierces ones body with either blade he will proceed to release a shock wave inside the persons body.
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Post by Shunsuke on Dec 31, 2010 17:24:28 GMT -5
[Throwing his Appearance in so I don't lose it.]
Name: Nobiganata Shunsuke
Rank: Jounin
Brief History: Born into Kirigakure during an era of war, Shunsuke was thrown into the academy as soon as he could. He was trained to become a killing machine, as that was exactly what Kirigakure needed at the time. Shunsuke quickly learned the hard ways of life, after watching his best friend die in an exam, to none other than one of his teammates. Infuriated, he killed the child who did it, and through his rage, was promoted to Genin.
Genin was not an easy task for Shunsuke, as his squad were sent on B and A ranked missions nearly every week, whether it was eliminating Nukenin spies, or catching missing ninja, it was something that a child found hard to handle. Though, Shunsuke was a naturally skilled shinobi, and managed to cope with the stress. However, whilst on a mission in the Land of Honey, to catch a possible threat to Kirigakure, his Jōnin-sensei was slain, and the squad barely caught the Nukenin alive.
They returned without a sensei, and the Nidaime promoted them to Chūnin straight away, as there were no available Jūnin remaining, most were fighting the war. Shunsuke was given his former-sensei's twin sabres, which he began to train with, and eventually managed to master them in a natural way, as if he were born to use Kenjutsu. The Nidaime noted this, and Shunsuke was sent into war, where he killed over 40 enemy ninja through Kenjutsu alone.
During battle however, he was knocked unconscious and taken to an enemy holding camp. Somehow he used Taijutsu to free himself from his bonds, and knock the enemy shinobi guarding the camp out. Shunsuke single-handedly rescued the other dozen shinobi who were being captured, and returned to Kirigakure a hero. He was approached by a member of the Shinobigatana, and offered a position as one of the Seven Swordsman.
Sword Name and Abilities: Kaisakugun [Cutting Force] The Kaisakugun are a pair of twin sabres wielded by Swordsmaster Shunsuke. The sabres are crafted from some type of foreign material, which is lightweight yet strong. The sabres on their own act as normal blades, capable of piercing bone, though no more. The special ability of the blade is activated when Shunsuke combines the two Sabres together by the hilt, creating one, long, double-edged blade.
This is the combat form of the Kaisakugun, which allows Shunsuke to channel his fūton chakra through the blade, creating a cutting force capable of slicing through stone, trees, and other strong objects. It also allows him to channel futon chakra through it.
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Post by The Mad Hatter on Jan 1, 2011 13:14:13 GMT -5
Kinzoku: cutting Ninjutsu in half is a no-no.
Kain: That's a pretty pathetic ability. A chakra-reactive screwdriver? You can have something a wee bit better than that, y'know.
Sketch: Not complaining or anything, yours looks fine at first glance, but we are the seven swordsmen, not the seven scythemen or seven staffmen.
Jace: yours is fine.
Shunsuke: One, take out "seemingly unbreakable". ANYTHING is breakable. Second, take out the part where saying a word makes the sword develop a mind of its own and connect. Just put the sword together yourself, really. It's easier on all of us.
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Post by Shunsuke on Jan 1, 2011 16:18:23 GMT -5
Modified. :]
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Post by Uchiha Shinji on Jan 1, 2011 18:36:58 GMT -5
^What he said.
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Post by The Mad Hatter on Jan 2, 2011 0:26:24 GMT -5
Shunsuke: good to go, though the "torrential winds" will need to be registered as a jutsu. If you wanna remove that for now, that'd be grand.
Kinzoku: "Chakra enhanced vibrations". Yeah... I don't really see how vibrations can be chakra enhanced; I think that'd be a jutsu, like what the samurai or Kirabi use with swords. >_> Try and explain the vibrations another way maybe? I dunno; they don't pay me enough to do jutsu too.
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Post by Uchiha Shinji on Jan 2, 2011 1:20:12 GMT -5
Fixed. And I learned something new today. (Since I had to look up vibrations and how they work) lmao
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Post by Tatsuo on Jan 3, 2011 23:40:41 GMT -5
Just a little comment. You know all your swords are basically doing the exact same thing as chakra flow and the samurai jutsu, right?
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Post by Uchiha Shinji on Jan 4, 2011 2:13:44 GMT -5
I didn't know that... therefore, I edited my post.
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Post by Shunsuke on Jan 4, 2011 2:39:00 GMT -5
Done, am I good to make the character now?
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Post by Tenzō on Jan 4, 2011 15:42:07 GMT -5
Sketch: Your sword is basically Samurai jutsu.
Jace: There are other swords which possess what your sword does. Please make it different.
Kinzoku: Pending.
Shunsuke: Pending.
To the Shinobigatana applicants:
Your sword is suppose to be unique, most of these swords that have not been accepted resemble each other or some of the abilities have been overused. Little diversity please.
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Post by Jace on Jan 4, 2011 20:19:21 GMT -5
edited
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Post by The Mad Hatter on Jan 5, 2011 23:46:33 GMT -5
Chakra Enhanced Poison, sketch? Yeah... no. That ain't happenin'.
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Post by Kotetsu Hiruzen on Jan 6, 2011 12:47:48 GMT -5
Name: Dochi Zenjuro [Zen]
Rank: Jonin
Brief History: Kin was raised near the ending of the first war and reached maturity in body and skill by the time he entered the second. His parents were both killed in war and he was left under the care of his grandfather who was retired but one of the shinobi around at the founding of Kirigakure. He learned most of his skills through this man, skills that were still in the mindset of two generations ago where blood and murder were thriving, where the ideas of uniting were that of fantasy and the older age preferred to continue bumping heads.
From a second sensei, his tutor, Kin inherited the powerful Tsuribari blades of Kirigakure's most elite group of warriors. Kin became one of the group on the death of his sensei who brought him into the heat of battle day after day showing the prowess and skill one of the group most hold.
Sword Name and Abilities:
Tsuribari [Fish Hooks]
Fish Hooks is a pair of hook type swords that have a curved blade at the end forming the shape of a square. Their abilities involve a wide array of being able to disarm an opponent swiftly and with ease as well as toppling larger soldiers and obstacles using their weight against them.
The hidden ability of these blades is that one is able to hold and carry the kinetic force of what it strikes by using chakra to hold that force in the blade. The force is able to be released in a powerful blow or by using the second blade the wielder can release the chakra in a wide powerful slash or manipulate the shape with enough skill to fire off useful strikes in different forms.
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Post by Tou-kun on Jan 8, 2011 7:49:36 GMT -5
Neji told me to look over Egz's sword since he thought it fell into Jutsu. I'm fine with the kinetic energy aspect but not the part where you add the element on top of it. Just remove that and it's all fine with me.
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Post by Kotetsu Hiruzen on Jan 8, 2011 8:54:39 GMT -5
Done
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Post by Tenzō on Jan 12, 2011 16:02:06 GMT -5
Kinzoku: Pending
Shunshuke: Pending
You need to ask someone to be their apprentice, Chanpuru. When you get permission, we will go from there.
Dochi Kin: Approved
5/7 Shinobigatana.
2 Spots remaining.
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